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horrible

You released this a day after the first one, obviously you took little notice of my review. You are releasing these too fast, and teh flash shows it. There is either a sketched background or a blank white one. your top down camerashots leave all people so it looks as if they are lieing on the ground. 99% of this flash is motiontween and it looks TERRIBLE with your hand drawn/anime characters. The STORY is GREAT, but each episode is too short. If you combined the first and second episode into one episode it would have been much better. TAKE YOUR TIME RELEASING THESE SPEND 1-2 weeks on 1 episode at least. MAKE IT LOOK GOOD, make walking animations, not like a bouncing drawing or feet leaning forward and back. I'll rate even lower on your next one if it has no improvements.

HotSiZZle responds:

As for releasing them to fast, the reason I did that was because the first ep has been finshed for a long time and I just got both of them voiced at the same time. I do agree with what you are saying though. In the next and later eps there will be more action plus fxf. I will also try to slow things down b/c I can see what you mean when I go back and watch it. Thanks you all for your reviews and helpful commentary. The next one should be much better.

wow

Surprisingly this is alot better then i thought it was gonna be. 7/10 because no preloader and was only stick figures. GREAt animation though!!!

stick70 responds:

omg preloader.

well...

I liked the idea, but flash could have been longer expand on it. WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

BMack24 responds:

dunno, haven't planned that far ahead.

we're sorry

You have now been demoted to 15

Heil responds:

nope

wow

I liked that alot more then the first one. Wasn't as slow. Had more action and was funny.

Battosai810 responds:

I think the first had a tiny bit more plot development (as much as such a cartoon really allowed) but hey, I'm happy to know you liked this one more than the first!

cool

Nice combination of 3d and flash, I want to see full thing!

Kalapusa responds:

Doing that rotating ship within flash was tough back in the day.

O NO ITS THE BLOB!!!!!!!

haha, get some VA, this could be awesome :P

mattuiop responds:

thanks dude!

haha

9 only because sound quality was weak :(
Funny and REALLY LONG but not boring. Make more :P

ScottFalco responds:

I plan on it

choppy

The animation was VERY choppy and made it frustrating to watch. Try upping your fps.

ernie-doc responds:

Thanks for the suggestion.:)

I recently started with flash. I love animating drawing and 3d modeling.

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