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amazing

Amazing fbf animation! Great detail, I forgot I was watching a flash, so well done i thought it was a cartoon on TV. Good Job make more!

work on it...

Your animation and drawing skills are amazing. However, I felt the environments to be very empty. Also the story was kind of boring, and bad dialog, made it more mediocre, but the voice actors were good. . It ran much too long, and could probably have been cut in half. Work on your story more. There were parts that left me wondering, ok so what's the point? Looking forward to a sequel!

its 4/30/08!!!!

Wheres the 3rd one :O

Lalo responds:

in my computerrrrr

excellent

Very well made, many people say you dont explain things when in fact you actualy demonstrated what certain things are mean and do. More and more people want you to tell them what to animate now a days in tutorials, however this movie shows just what a tutorial should, but allows the user to figure it out along the way. Very nice. Add music maybe next time :D

looking forward

Looking forward to the next episode :D

horrible

You released this a day after the first one, obviously you took little notice of my review. You are releasing these too fast, and teh flash shows it. There is either a sketched background or a blank white one. your top down camerashots leave all people so it looks as if they are lieing on the ground. 99% of this flash is motiontween and it looks TERRIBLE with your hand drawn/anime characters. The STORY is GREAT, but each episode is too short. If you combined the first and second episode into one episode it would have been much better. TAKE YOUR TIME RELEASING THESE SPEND 1-2 weeks on 1 episode at least. MAKE IT LOOK GOOD, make walking animations, not like a bouncing drawing or feet leaning forward and back. I'll rate even lower on your next one if it has no improvements.

HotSiZZle responds:

As for releasing them to fast, the reason I did that was because the first ep has been finshed for a long time and I just got both of them voiced at the same time. I do agree with what you are saying though. In the next and later eps there will be more action plus fxf. I will also try to slow things down b/c I can see what you mean when I go back and watch it. Thanks you all for your reviews and helpful commentary. The next one should be much better.

potential

There was ALOT of motion tweening, and it didn't look right with the hand drawn characters. try and add more fbf animation. Also voice actiors kind of sucked... were way to serious. The Camera jumped around alot and teh story flew by in 30 seconds. It was also a bit short. Take more time on releasing the sequel. Polish it up, add alot to it and make it way better then the first one. When you think your finished with it watch it again and revise all the parts and make it even better. Alot of potential.

loading scree

What is the song on teh loading screen called?

I recently started with flash. I love animating drawing and 3d modeling.

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