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I'm a High school student trying to find out what I'd like to do for the rest of my life. I like to make maps for games such as Counter Strike, Doom, and Quake. I am skilled in photoshop, webdesign and can use 3d max. I am now starting out with flash.
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After the 2 balls is impossible, has anyone actually got past it yet?
The music did start to get a bit repetitive after like 30 restarts, and there were minor graphical issues, but it ran smooth sounded good and was fun!
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Looking forward to the next episode :D
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You released this a day after the first one, obviously you took little notice of my review. You are releasing these too fast, and teh flash shows it. There is either a sketched background or a blank white one. your top down camerashots leave all people so it looks as if they are lieing on the ground. 99% of this flash is motiontween and it looks TERRIBLE with your hand drawn/anime characters. The STORY is GREAT, but each episode is too short. If you combined the first and second episode into one episode it would have been much better. TAKE YOUR TIME RELEASING THESE SPEND 1-2 weeks on 1 episode at least. MAKE IT LOOK GOOD, make walking animations, not like a bouncing drawing or feet leaning forward and back. I'll rate even lower on your next one if it has no improvements.
Author's Response:
As for releasing them to fast, the reason I did that was because the first ep has been finshed for a long time and I just got both of them voiced at the same time. I do agree with what you are saying though. In the next and later eps there will be more action plus fxf. I will also try to slow things down b/c I can see what you mean when I go back and watch it. Thanks you all for your reviews and helpful commentary. The next one should be much better.
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The music never loaded for me, it stayed at 0% otherwise great tut, i just read 40% of it.
Author's Response:
Yeah, there's a problem with the uploaded site, it's being fixed right now. Thanks :).
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wow thats annoying haha
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There was ALOT of motion tweening, and it didn't look right with the hand drawn characters. try and add more fbf animation. Also voice actiors kind of sucked... were way to serious. The Camera jumped around alot and teh story flew by in 30 seconds. It was also a bit short. Take more time on releasing the sequel. Polish it up, add alot to it and make it way better then the first one. When you think your finished with it watch it again and revise all the parts and make it even better. Alot of potential.
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lol i laughed, add more stuff to it, like a game, make challenges to how loud you have to scream haha.
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I mean it was ok...
The topic itself is soo over used and there was nothing new really brought to the table, when you see videos like this you expect more. Add more originality to it.
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I lover your critisim
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I hated that soo much because there was nothing to do. HOWEVER I played it for over an hour and a half so far and am still playing, so I don't think I hated it as much. Maybe music was brainwashing me. Very good game make another version!!!
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Surprisingly this is alot better then i thought it was gonna be. 7/10 because no preloader and was only stick figures. GREAt animation though!!!
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omg preloader.
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