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Age/Gender: 17, Male
I'm a High school student trying to find out what I'd like to do for the rest of my life. I like to make maps for games such as Counter Strike, Doom, and Quake. I am skilled in photoshop, webdesign and can use 3d max. I am now starting out with flash.
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However~ I do not like any animation that try to COPY what EGO RAPTOR DID. Make your own style and jokes. I seriously thought this was ego raptors for a bit, until i realized teh voices were NOT his. 4/5 because the animation was excellent, and it was kind of funny. Next time don;t copy some ones ideas.
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I liked the story and animation was great. However, I hated Mandy. She was the stupidest character in terms of realism ever, which I guess could have been intended? It would have been better if she was believable. I kept wanting to exit the flash, but I held on. I think more time should have been spent with the phones in teh flash and less time on the human characters.
Author's Response:
I assume you mean Mindy? Yep, she'll do that. :] Thanks for sticking it out.
The general feeling here seems to be that she is "believable" in the sense of her characterisation and her basis in a real-life stereotype, but a realistic design to her appearance would be dull. If you want that kind of believable, go watch some more reality TV.
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This is a terrible rip off of MdotStrange's "We are the Strange" You even used the same color scheme, ideas and sound effects. I do not like people using otherpeoples ideas like this.
http://www.wearethestrange.com for more info on the original
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for your first submission, only thing was there was liek 5 minutes of the guy running... Add more action next time and less loops.
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The Audio and voice Acting is really mediocre. Story is Interesting but I felt the beginning to this was a bit TOO slow. I liked Ep1 alot more, it was dramatic and to the point. It would have been much better if you had her wake up, have a brief news report on in background while she answers her friend calling her on phone. She heads out in car and on the way she happens to come by this guy on ground maybe through officer in somewhere before. That all happening in under 3 minutes. There was alot of dry scenes when not much happened. Work on that and your set :P I wanna know what happens next.
Author's Response:
I agree with you. Looking back this is pretty slow. I would fix it but I actually finished this portion 2 years ago and have moved on. Your review was very helpful though, please check out my newer stuff once I get it up here. Id love to hear what you think!
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I dont know what it was but i REALLY liked the ending. The animation itself, was pretty basic motion tweens, work could be done there. The graphics looked really good though. Music was nice too. Make more please :D
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Well being you credited everyone you took the art from it gets a 9. Taking animated flash and adding your stuff overtop isn't the best idea....
The story here was decent, but it has been done before. Next time animate your own versions of all the Newgrounds characters.
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I found myself listening only to the mp3. The actual animation had little to do with the actual comedy, and wasn't that funny. The Audio was a 10 but the flash a 6.
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Was decent, Increase Frame Rate, by like 2x and you be set. Was really slow.
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Very nice, you are indeed a great animator.
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